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Montanez's Short Story 'Careful What You Wish For'
Montanez,Angelica

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09,13,15

` ` short story

Careful What You Wish For

by:Angelica Montanez

Hi, I am Cloe if you have trouble saying it then think of flow then say it.

I have a very annoying brother named Jack, he always ruins everything. I absolutly hate Jack, just today he ate a worm out of daddy’s tackle box. I wish he was dead, or better yet had never been born. We were at the park and he hit me ,so I said I hated him he ran away, how much of a baby can he be. I went home to see if he was there ,but surely enough he wasn't there. I’ve looked for Jack everywhere even at the dreadful Toby’s …show more content…
I couldn’t find him.I went to go to the pet store but he wasn't there. Now where will I find him? How will I find him if I don't know what he likes I dont even know what grade he’s in.The only person who knows these things is Toby. I went once more to Toby’s disturbing house and Toby said that He loves exotic creatures so now off to the zoo to find my little brother. No matter how much I hate him I love him more than anything in the world so how could he go missing even if I wished him away he knows I love him , doesn't he? When we were at the zoo and I couldn't find my little brother I started to cry not because I might be dead in a few hours but because I missed my little brother he meant everything to me even though I don't admit it I love him more than anything in the world. then Toby and I decided that we should check the pool. I ran to the pool as fast as a cheetah no matter what I will find him.” JACK”, we screamed as loud as we could. this time there was a reply but from where? The sound seemed to be coming from everywhere and nowhere at the same time just then I blacked out… When I woke up I didn’t know where I was or how to
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