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5/2/17
I chose a four as your overall grade. Your transition phrases between sentences and paragraphs were done very well. Although your words you used to transition were written very well, some other words and phrases you used where not the greatest terms to use, For example, amazing. Your story would have been more powerful if you used stronger words such as astounding. Another area you can work on is writing more extensive paragraphs and sentences.
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