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Why the essay deserves an A.

The essay in general that deserves an A, is something well written and can catch the readers interest. It has to have a strong beginning, middle and end. Dialogue as well. The characters interaction with each other because otherwise it is just characters actions. Which it tends to usually draw away the interest of the reader. Something to keep the reader wanting to read more. Do not forget about punctuation and correct use of grammar. Grammar and punctuation is very important in an essay, especially when your English teacher is big about it.

The essay is well constructed. It has acceptable grammar usage and the essay contains a great amount of dialogue. An A, as the grade of the essay would be very appropriate. It deserves an A for many reasons. The first is the spelling. The essay has been proof read twice and checked by another person. The grammar is well written. The sentences make sense. The essay has a very good plot. All the dialogue and sentences should be punctuated correctly. There might be a couple of mistakes though. The essay includes an acceptable amount of dialogue. The interactions between the characters have quotation marks around everything they say. The essay also follows the basic guidelines. One of them being no less than five hundred words and must be written in the third person perspective. The essay used mainly proper nouns and the only time it used pronouns was in the dialogue. It has a catchy beginning a good body and a good conclusion. The essay has a classic story line. The climax of the story is extremely interesting and will keep the reader anxious to see what is next. The essay is computer generated. It is a hard copy. This was mandatory. The essay also included a title and author, which is something every narrative should have. Another important thing was that the essay was submitted on time. It was not submitted late. And if it was submitted late, it wouldn’t of have been accepted and that would’ve

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