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Short Story: Stori's Haunted House
Stori and I had been planning on going to this haunted house since November 1, 2015. We couldn’t wait for that night! We were going to make it through, then later walk into school Triumphantly announcing our trip through Jaycees haunted house! It would be amazing and kids in our grade would be in awe! We were planning on going at midnight just to make the stakes even higher. But, it came to a surprise to us that there was no way out of the petrifying haunted house! Every kid would be going to Jaycees that night and possibly never come back! Stori and I got into my mom’s car, got into a seat and buckled up. It seemed like it was a long drive, Stori and I were scared yet excited at the same time. The whole ride we were talking about how there was no way anyone would even believe that we made it through Jaycees at midnight but we were going to make it, we were certain of it! My mom pulled into the parking lot and told us, “Call me when you’re done.” We got out of the car, and headed toward the haunted house. …show more content…
We were terrified, questioning ourselves,
“Is this just part of the haunted house? If so this haunted house is a lot more scarier than we thought.” We were in there for about an hour, hearing screams, thuds, and cackles. We were to scared to talk to each other. I was crying, and I wasn’t sure if Stori was since it was pitch black but according to the little sniffles I heard, I assumed she was. I was about to fall asleep, when I heard everything get silent, then the door creaked open, it was a dark but I could see a little and from what I saw there was no one standing there. We waited a few minutes, then I Exclaimed,
“ We should try to escape.”
Stori

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