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Personal Narrative: My Baby-Turned Baby
I walked down the stairs counting each step I took. I approached my mom getting ready to leave for work. “Morning Sophie we have cereal and cinnamon roles in the fridge for breakfast.” said my mom.
I stopped talking to my mom and ate the cinnamon rolls, warm and soft it took my mind off of my dream for a second. “I had the weirdest dream last night mom. There was this baby-headed baby with a spider body who consumed all the eggs in my body and took away my ability to have children. It scared me I woke up shaking.” I said anxiously. “Haha that is a weird dream, but don’t worry about it Sophie, it's just a dream. I don’t have time to talk, I’m late for work, but have a good day at school.” spoke my mother as she raced out the door. I continued
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The spider started walking around the room to see if I was in there. I had the bench, a stool, and a bunch of random objects I found in my moms room and closet. I ran to the closet and locked that door as well, and the top of the closet there was a hole leading up to the attic. I was always too frightened to go up into the attic due to spiders, rats, and other unknown things that could be up there. I knew if I had to go up though. I started climbing onto the shelves of the closet and opened up the cover into the attic. There was cobwebs and I was covered in them. I shut the door to the attic and sat trying not to make any noise at all. I sat in the attic as silent as Anne Frank was while she was in hiding. I sat in a room full of stress and anxiousness. An hour passed and there was no noise. I couldn’t sit in the attic all day, I had to get out eventually. Thirty minutes later, I peeked open the door to see into the closet, nothing was there and it was dead silent. I jumped out of the attic trying to be as quiet as a hummingbird. I tiptoed to peek out of the bathroom. There right in front of me was the monster. I was trapped, there was nothing I could do besides to plead and cry. I felt a big wind that felt like something was being sucked out of me. The monster looked at me almost as he was seeing through me. The baby head laughed and slowly, the whole monster slowly started …show more content…
10 years had passed since that day and I haven’t seen the monster since. I thought that maybe it was gone forever. I always had questions that I know could never be answered. Questions like, what was that? Why did it come to me? Have other people seen it? What did it do to me? Why did it only come for a short time and never come to me again? I will never know the answers to those questions, but I have learned to just accept that fact and move on. I was happy that I got to experience something so unreal, and unbelievable. I was happily married now and we were ready for a baby. That was my biggest fear to find out if I couldn’t have kids or not. Luckily I ended up becoming pregnant and I was perfectly healthy and so was the baby. I was going to go and find out what the gender was today and I’m super excited. I have always wanted a little boy, but obviously I would be in love with my little girl if I had one. I got to the doctor’s with my husband and I was

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