Peer Review: Our Side Of The Fence
Cause/Effect Essay Peer Review
Directions: Please use Microsoft Word or a compatible word processing program to computerize responses to these questions. Attached to this form is an outstanding computerized peer review written in my English 1301 course in Fall 2013. This student wrote in essay form. This peer review, unlike yours, is about an essay analyzing a short story. Still, this peer review gives you an idea of how to conduct one. Essay form is fine as long as all of my questions are addressed. Yet even if you merely use the form and answer the questions, you have just as much of a chance at a score of “30/30” as someone who writes an essay. Your Name__Abby Ybarra_____________ Writer’s Name_____Student 13__________________ …show more content…
It was satisfactory and pulled me in from the first sentence, which says, “A rather intriguing story “Our Side of the Fence” is, it follows the narrators thoughts concerning his new neighbors that have just moved into his family next door”.
2.) Thesis: “Three things I liked about this wondrous short story, was the friendliness and honor the narrators family appears to possess, the concise thought process behind the narrator, and the simplicity yet effectiveness bond the narrator’s family embodies”
3.) The concluding paragraph was awful it may have had a thesis statement but the ending could have been better. This writer fell short with the last sentence “I hope to be able to read more short stories similar to this, ones that I can really get into and feel as though I am the narrator himself in the story”. That just didn’t appeal to me at
Directions: Please use Microsoft Word or a compatible word processing program to computerize responses to these questions. Attached to this form is an outstanding computerized peer review written in my English 1301 course in Fall 2013. This student wrote in essay form. This peer review, unlike yours, is about an essay analyzing a short story. Still, this peer review gives you an idea of how to conduct one. Essay form is fine as long as all of my questions are addressed. Yet even if you merely use the form and answer the questions, you have just as much of a chance at a score of “30/30” as someone who writes an essay. Your Name__Abby Ybarra_____________ Writer’s Name_____Student 13__________________ …show more content…
It was satisfactory and pulled me in from the first sentence, which says, “A rather intriguing story “Our Side of the Fence” is, it follows the narrators thoughts concerning his new neighbors that have just moved into his family next door”.
2.) Thesis: “Three things I liked about this wondrous short story, was the friendliness and honor the narrators family appears to possess, the concise thought process behind the narrator, and the simplicity yet effectiveness bond the narrator’s family embodies”
3.) The concluding paragraph was awful it may have had a thesis statement but the ending could have been better. This writer fell short with the last sentence “I hope to be able to read more short stories similar to this, ones that I can really get into and feel as though I am the narrator himself in the story”. That just didn’t appeal to me at