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How Lawyers Lose Their Way
1. I don’t use semicolons very often in my writing. I never used them much because I never quite knew when or where to add one. After reading this chapter, I have more confidence in my use of semicolons.

2. I believe this is a wonderful way to explain the semicolon. When I am deep in a book I am interested in, I do see it this way as well, that its not ending, and the semicolon means I can gather more information.

3. How Lawyers Lose Their Way: A Profession Fails Its Creative Minds. The book was written by Jean Stefancic and Richard Delgado. It is a fascinating book on the true problem why lawyers can’t attach or keep emotional relationships. Spoiler alert; It’s not the long hours or stress of the job! 4. The difference in punctuation for

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