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Unit 1 Discussion-Prehistory
17 / 25

Individual Feedback:
Donny,
I've deducted points for missing the deadline and I'd like to offer a few suggestions for improvement.
I need to see a lot more detail in your posts in both detail (facts) and analysis (what you think). In addition, you'll need to respond more to your peers.
If you incorporate these suggestions into your future posts, I'm sure your grade will improve.

Unit 2 Discussion-Hebrews
- / 25

Unit 3 Discussion-China
- / 25

Unit 4 -The Greeks
- / 25

Unit 5 Discussion-From Republic to Empire
- / 25

Unit 6 Discussion-Christianity and Islam
- / 25

Unit 7 Discussion - The Americas and Medieval Africa
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Unit 8 Discussion-The Renaissance
- / 25

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Unit 2 Essay-Mesopotamia
67 / 100

Individual Feedback:
Donny,
You have a nice writing style and you provided good information. However, I'm not sure you had a clear understanding of the assignment. Please make you carefully read the assignment requirements. Your formatting is in no recognizable standard and you did not use a textbook at all for a source. While video can be good, they cannot be your only source. In addition there is no clear thesis statement.
Before you submit your next essay, I want you to take advantage of the writing tutoring service offered by eCore or your home institution. Have them look over your essays.
Learning to write a college-level essay isn't easy, but with practice and tutoring, it will become easier.
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Unit 4 Essay-Hellenistic Philosophy
- / 100

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Orientation Quiz
80 / 100

Unit 1 Quiz
- / 100

Unit 2 Quiz
- / 100

Unit 3 Quiz
- / 100

Unit 4 Quiz
- / 100

Unit 5 Quiz
- / 100

Unit 6 Quiz
- / 100
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