English Report Writing
ERS ASSIGNMENT
1. List of Changes
Cover Page
• There is no name, student number, coach and date
• The title should be revised to fit the context of the report
Executive Summary
• There is none
Table of Contents
• It should not list “table of contents” itself
• Page numbers should start after the table of contents, not from the cover page
• “Bibliography” should be numbered
Introduction
• The thesis statement is not clear
• It is better to divide the fist paragraph into to two separate paragraphs
(One is for the opening quotation; the other is for the case of KiK)
Methodology
• The first paragraph is not relevant
• It should not use personal pronouns (“my” and “I”)
• The way how the research has been done should be mentioned
• Description of the sources used and the reason why these sources are used should be mentioned
• It is not necessary to mention the use of a dictionary
• Limitations on the scope and extent of the research should be mentioned
Main Body
• Wrong footnotes of every chapters
• A linking preview could be used at the beginning of each chapter to make the report smooth and corresponding
3.1 Company Description
The paragraphs is not in logical order
The Slogan should be translated
The history is too detailed, some information is not necessary
2. Recent Scandals
The first sentence is not relevant
It is not good to use a quote as a whole paragraph
4 EU Regulations
It shows no relationship with the previous case
It is better to put this chapter 4 before chapter 3 as criteria
5.1 Corporate Responsibility
The first sentence of this subchapter looks like a quote while there is no mark
Some statement should be added to make it relevant with the previous case
There are no
1. List of Changes
Cover Page
• There is no name, student number, coach and date
• The title should be revised to fit the context of the report
Executive Summary
• There is none
Table of Contents
• It should not list “table of contents” itself
• Page numbers should start after the table of contents, not from the cover page
• “Bibliography” should be numbered
Introduction
• The thesis statement is not clear
• It is better to divide the fist paragraph into to two separate paragraphs
(One is for the opening quotation; the other is for the case of KiK)
Methodology
• The first paragraph is not relevant
• It should not use personal pronouns (“my” and “I”)
• The way how the research has been done should be mentioned
• Description of the sources used and the reason why these sources are used should be mentioned
• It is not necessary to mention the use of a dictionary
• Limitations on the scope and extent of the research should be mentioned
Main Body
• Wrong footnotes of every chapters
• A linking preview could be used at the beginning of each chapter to make the report smooth and corresponding
3.1 Company Description
The paragraphs is not in logical order
The Slogan should be translated
The history is too detailed, some information is not necessary
2. Recent Scandals
The first sentence is not relevant
It is not good to use a quote as a whole paragraph
4 EU Regulations
It shows no relationship with the previous case
It is better to put this chapter 4 before chapter 3 as criteria
5.1 Corporate Responsibility
The first sentence of this subchapter looks like a quote while there is no mark
Some statement should be added to make it relevant with the previous case
There are no