Teen
My bad habits
Why everywhere I go bad habits get me in trouble? For example I get in trouble at (1) home (2) school and I even get in trouble for my (3) personal habits. Even though my bad habits might be weird, they have caused some real serious consequences. [THESIS] [Clincher] First of all [transition] my bad habit have got me in trouble at (1) home so many times, cause I touch to much.my mom gets mad when I touch something and don’t put it back where I found it. For example [transition] I remember this one time I was using the laptop in the bathroom and I forgot to put it where I found it. I got whooping that day. Another [transition] reason why I get in trouble is I talk back to my parent. I talk back to my parent cause think they know everything that be happening, but they really don’t. [Clincher] Most importantly [transition] my bad habits always seem to get me in trouble at (2) school my teacher gets frustrated when I sleep in class. For example [transition] I remember last day of school I tried putting my head down she send me to discipline. One more [transition] thing that gets me in trouble at school is the way I act. I clown around and the other students react by laughing, but she gets mad and kicks me out class. [Clincher] Last but not least [transition] (3) my personal habit is the nastiest one of all my bad habits. Reason why I say that is because I eat off the floor. Then [transition] there is this one rule that says if it was on the ground for more than 5 second you can still eat it. Another [transition] reason why my personal habit is the nastiest of all my habits is I dig in my nose. I dig in my nose because I always feel like there’s a dry buggier in the corner of my nose. In conclusion [transition] Even though my bad habits might get me in trouble, at (1) home (2) school and even (3) personal habits they also have well in it to. [THESIS] That’s why Even though my bad habits might be weird; they also have
Why everywhere I go bad habits get me in trouble? For example I get in trouble at (1) home (2) school and I even get in trouble for my (3) personal habits. Even though my bad habits might be weird, they have caused some real serious consequences. [THESIS] [Clincher] First of all [transition] my bad habit have got me in trouble at (1) home so many times, cause I touch to much.my mom gets mad when I touch something and don’t put it back where I found it. For example [transition] I remember this one time I was using the laptop in the bathroom and I forgot to put it where I found it. I got whooping that day. Another [transition] reason why I get in trouble is I talk back to my parent. I talk back to my parent cause think they know everything that be happening, but they really don’t. [Clincher] Most importantly [transition] my bad habits always seem to get me in trouble at (2) school my teacher gets frustrated when I sleep in class. For example [transition] I remember last day of school I tried putting my head down she send me to discipline. One more [transition] thing that gets me in trouble at school is the way I act. I clown around and the other students react by laughing, but she gets mad and kicks me out class. [Clincher] Last but not least [transition] (3) my personal habit is the nastiest one of all my bad habits. Reason why I say that is because I eat off the floor. Then [transition] there is this one rule that says if it was on the ground for more than 5 second you can still eat it. Another [transition] reason why my personal habit is the nastiest of all my habits is I dig in my nose. I dig in my nose because I always feel like there’s a dry buggier in the corner of my nose. In conclusion [transition] Even though my bad habits might get me in trouble, at (1) home (2) school and even (3) personal habits they also have well in it to. [THESIS] That’s why Even though my bad habits might be weird; they also have