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Speech As You Rhetorical Analysis
I actually did the exact same speech as you. I agree that he does use a lot of fillers like um, and yeah, especially when he was coming up with what he was going to say next. I believe he was one of those kids who doesn't do any work in class and ends up winging it when it comes time. You can see that he didn't think through his speech at all. He doesn't have confidence in what he is saying, which leads to him avoiding eye contact with the audience and ends up with terrible body language. I also agree that his topic didn't help him very much, considering that there is not much to say about the subject.
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