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Personal Narrative: My Struggle
Everyone struggles at one time or another. Some people struggle more than others. In 2011 my family lost our home and had to stay with our family members and friends. The times were hard, but the person I became because of this struggle knows the value of something so small. Through the hard times I found a way to get back on track.
Freshman year was rocky from the start. After losing our home and moving in with family, we had to overcome the most difficult circumstance to date. We had no other option, there were already two families living in the house that we were going to move into and this would be overwhelming and awkward. There was only one bathroom and more than ten people. If you woke up early in the morning, you could take a shower

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