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Personal Narrative Essay: Jeff's Story
He goes to the hoop. He jumps, hanging in the air for what felt like eternity. It was his second game. Brought up from the D-League, he needed to prove himself. His name is Jeff “Elmo” Beige. As the ball is coming down, closer to the hoop another individual comes into play. The name is unnecessary to know, but the man is key to Jeff’s story. The man jumps. He didn’t have to, but he did it anyway. His six-foot ten body could have easily blocked the shot on Jeff’s six-foot five structure. As Jeff’s hand with the ball comes crashing toward the net the man’s hand makes contact with the ball. The ball doesn't even touch the rim. Rejected at the rim. Jeff’s career is over at that very moment. One block defined his whole basketball career. Such a dejected ending for a fantastic story.
Before one can understand what was mentioned above his story must be told. Jeff Beige was born at “the top of the world.” What I mean by this is he was born in Barrow, Alaska. The most northern settlement in the entire United States of America. Jeff’s life was somewhat recluse. He and his two brothers were involved in the community, but they did not know much about the rest of the world. Sure they
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Not bad for a six-foot five center from Barrow, Alaska. In addition to that, his shooting percentage went up. During his junior year of college his shooting percentage was thirty-five percent. Ouch! At the end of his senior year his shooting percentage was forty-seven percent, and he averaged six rebounds and two blocks per game. Even with these numbers, Jeff was disappointed. Jeff came to an important realization. It is highly unlikely that he will get drafted. Then a silver lining in Jeff’s clouded mind of depression appeared. The Utah Jazz wanted to talk with him. The NBA’s Utah Jazz! They wanted to talk to a six-foot five center from Barrow, Alaska! This was a big deal. Jeff got on the first plane to Salt Lake City,

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