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Mother Hens Cluck: Blogs
The blog post “Mother Hens Cluck: Cell phones support learning” is a better blog post than “Trust Your Gut: Blog post from a high school athlete.” To start off, the blog post “Mother Hens Cluck”, the reasons given are more logical than the blog post “Trust Your Gut” because if you look at the blog post, the evidence to back up the reasons are more clear cut of precise than the second blog post. For example, in the blog post they show numbers and statistics about the topic while the other blog post doesn't. Furthermore, the blog post “Mother Hens Cluck”, the soundest of the reasoning that she gives is more accurate than the blog post “Trust Your Gut.’’ For example, in the first blog post the reason that the teacher gives are logical and make sense while the the reasons in the second blog post are good, but are a little less logical and are a little bit more opinion than fact.

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