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Jake Solomon Alternate Ending
Jake Solomon floated through the realm of dreams, each showing Jake a glimpse into different realms each having different laws, beings, planets, creatures, and so on. It was a normal thing for Jake Solomon, but it was something he never remembered. He drifted through many like it was on a filter, guiding Jake's soul through a multitude of realms. He never seemed to stop, each realm flickering away like flashing lights.

But today, it seemed like his realm floating days were over. As his minuscule, mortal soul flickered in fear in front of the being that stood in front of it, Jake awoke from the dazed stupor that he experienced with every dream. His mind snapped awake as he noticed where he was, confusion and panic seen through his incessant …show more content…
A huge, looming mass of black and white. Each color battling each other at their borders, constantly moving.

It had two large eyes that changed from black to white depending on what color its eyes rested on. When its eyes were on black mass, it turned white, and vice versa. Jake couldn't comprehend what was happening, fear and confusion being the only emotion present in his mind.

"You interest me, child." The voice once again boomed, a large tendril of swirling black and white moved towards Jake's soul. It stabbed into Jake's blue, flickering soul. A searing pain spread throughout Jake, leaving him to let out a voiceless wheeze of pain. The only thing that passed his mind was fear and pain.

Yet as his soul experienced pain unfit for a mortal soul, a warm, yet cold energy seeped in unnoticed by Jake, slowly changing his soul from an indigo blue to a mix of gold and silver. Then, a calm, yet chaotic energy made its way into Jake, once again changing Jake's soul. This lasted only a few seconds, but to Jake, it felt like an eternity. Punishment and torture gave by some powerful being to atone for whatever he had
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