Conpare and Contrast Fedex and Ups
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There are two competitors, FedEx, and UPS, who dominate the air delivery and freight services industry in the United States, FedEx is the smaller of the two. UPS have a higher price earning while FedEx have a lower earnings per share.
With UPS” 2.5 billion miles in 2007, the company “says its package flow technology combined with right turns, save” 28,541,472 million miles and three million gallons of fuel.” If the company did not implement this plan, there would have to put an additional “1,100 trucks out on an everyday base, along with the other “92,000 trucks” that there have out on a daily base.
While FedEx still strive to maintain high expectation and on time deliveries with more products and services, more information, with “$29 billion network of companies, offering just the right mix of transportation, document management and supply chain solutions” FedEx still try to maintain high quality of services with the additional companies owned: - 2 -
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There are two competitors, FedEx, and UPS, who dominate the air delivery and freight services industry in the United States, FedEx is the smaller of the two. UPS have a higher price earning while FedEx have a lower earnings per share.
With UPS” 2.5 billion miles in 2007, the company “says its package flow technology combined with right turns, save” 28,541,472 million miles and three million gallons of fuel.” If the company did not implement this plan, there would have to put an additional “1,100 trucks out on an everyday base, along with the other “92,000 trucks” that there have out on a daily base.
While FedEx still strive to maintain high expectation and on time deliveries with more products and services, more information, with “$29 billion network of companies, offering just the right mix of transportation, document management and supply chain solutions” FedEx still try to maintain high quality of services with the additional companies owned: - 2 -
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1. Today, we have many different kinds...
This sentence is confusing and somewhat of a run-on.
Proofreading aloud can help you catch issues that you might overlook with a silent proofread. [Cassandra
Stichtenoth (TA)]
2. (DowJones
Consult Ashford's Writing
Center for examples of properly formatted in-text citations. Doing so is necessary is order to avoid plagiarism issues and deductions in your grade.
[Cassandra Stichtenoth (TA)]
3. While comparing, the two freight... This is a sentence fragment.
(Fragment. There is a missing subject, verb, and/or predicate part. Incorrect:
"Judging by the size of the footprints." Correct: "Judging by the size of the footprints, we knew that a raccoon had eaten the dogs' food."")
[Cassandra Stichtenoth