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Coming To Auburn University: A Personal Analysis
To summarize, Sara has truly captured about my life experiences and how I grew up to be an independent person by living in the States only with my dad. Only two parts were not authentic on the essay. When she talks about how I spent my senior years and how I ended up coming to Auburn University. Whenever she correct two parts, I believe “a story told” by me should turn out as what I
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