************************************************************************* Smarthinking’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Patrina! I am Esperanza C.‚ your E-structor for this session
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Julia Golubenko Mrs. Greenfield Close Reading and Critical Writing November 13‚ 2007 The movie Namesake was a fairly good depiction of the book. As a movie‚ apart from the book‚ it was good. The characters played their role well‚ emotional scenes were shown‚ and the point of the movie was easy to see. The problems that I had with the movie‚ was the fact that they cut out Gogol’s whole college life and Ruth‚ his first girlfriend. This was taking out a huge part of his life‚ where Gogol actually chose
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“Scott Pilgrim vs. The World” hit theaters in 2010 starting a sub cultural cult. The graphic novel series created by Bryan Lee O’Mally published between 2004 and 2010 created after the film to promote the film keep that phenomenon alive. The first volume to this six part series is “Scott Pilgrim’s Precious Little Life”. It starts out with a dramatic introduction to the main character of the series which is the announcement of his current dating status the fact that he is 23 and dating a high schooler
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talking about what they have been up to. The topic quickly moves into gossip though with even the guys interested in it. I pretty much predicted that gossip would be impossible to avoid because it is so ingrained in our lives. They discuss who’s cheating on whom‚ and who likes who‚ and all sorts of romantic coupling possibilities. Everyone in the group seemed to be happy and comfortable with each other and don’t seem to be changing their behavior because of my presence. There is a lot of joking
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still gets to stay at home. She will begin this fall. Our entire family has tried to encourage her to go on to medical school and that we can visit and she can visit and we would help her through. We then thought the boyfriend of two years was holding her back‚ but he was caught cheating and they have now split up‚ but her decision still stands firm she just does not want to go far from home. She has always entrusted me and come to me with all her problems when she needs to talk‚ I suppose because we
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Reality TV Essay Writing Today‚ modern television cannot be imagined without all the reality shows. Several years ago people used to watch soap operas and this was the main entertainment for those staying at home in the evening. Nowadays‚ I think‚ soap operas are completely replaced with the reality shows. So‚ this phenomenon would be really interesting to investigate in your reality TV essays. Do not forget to define the type of your reality TV essay. The content of essays on reality TV will
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Activity Handout 7.1 Solve This Problem Choose from the list of problem scenarios below. Using the steps involved in problem solving that were discussed in this chapter‚ describe how you would go about solving this problem. 1. Mrs. Smith’s daycare provider is closing in four weeks. Both Mr. and Mrs. Smith work full-time during the day and need daycare for their child. They have only a short period of time‚ however‚ to find a new‚ safe‚ reliable daycare provider. : I would start looking or asking
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We met on the 12th of July 2008 and he took my breath away. He was so cute and adorable that he stole my heart on the very first day. I saw him almost everyday after we met and we started to spend a lot of time with each other. 16th of July‚ he asked me out. As each day went by our love grew for each other more and more. Everything seemed so perfect‚ and although we had ours ups and downs we never let it get to us and we always managed to get through it. Our love was the strongest element of our
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it is more diffuse orientated. 3) In order to measure “your” dimension among persons of different nationality‚ prepare a series or questions (MCQ or Yes/No type are easier to analyze). Questionnaire Do you work in the same sector as your boyfriend/girlfriend? If not‚ would you feel
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been a time as a child when you felt jealous because you believed your best friend wanted to spend more time with someone else. Perhaps in later life you experienced a pang of jealousy when your friend seemed to want to spend more time with her boyfriend than with you. By being jealous‚ you actually develop a selfish attitude‚ and sacrifice what may have become your lifelong friendship. Anyone who has ever been in a serious relationship has probably felt the green-eyed monster creep into his or
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