“I” essay
“I” essay We all had those days that everything goes wrong. Those days that is full of embarrassing moments. Sadly for me, that is everyday. Embarrassing moments happen to me everywhere I go. But they happen the most in public. For example, in (1) Disney and at (2) restaurants. This usually happen to me because of my (3) clumsiness. Although I have these moments a lot, they always turn into a laugh. [THESIS]
One place [transition] where memories were created was at (1) Disney. Disney is always full with people so everyone was watching and it was even more embarrassing. There was this one time [transition A] that I was on a white-laced dress and flip-flops. It was a summer warm night so my friends and I usually go to the boardwalk when we stay at Disney. It was raining earlier the flip-flops were sticking on the boardwalk; it was like putting super glue on your fingers. Next thing you know, [transition B] I was on the floor with mud all over my white-laced dress. Surprisingly, lots of people helped me get up and get the mud off the dress. I’m very thankful to have great friends to help me though embarrassing moments like these. [clincher]
Another place [transition] where embarrassing moments happen to me is at (2) restaurants. These not only affect me but also people around me. For example, [transition A] Nick and I were waiting for out food to get here when this bird flew across the table. I panicked and I accidentally swung my hand across the table and spilled the drink. I felt so bad; it was all over his pants that I looked like he peed himself. Immediately, [transition B] we got up trying to avoid everyone laughing at us and yelling “PEE BOY”. We drove to our local Wal-Mart to buy new pants. He waited at the bathroom for about 20 minutes while I got him some new pants. It was the least I could do since he was going to get called ‘pee boy’ for the rest of the school year. At the end of the day, we had a good laugh and he wasn’t mad at all.
One place [transition] where memories were created was at (1) Disney. Disney is always full with people so everyone was watching and it was even more embarrassing. There was this one time [transition A] that I was on a white-laced dress and flip-flops. It was a summer warm night so my friends and I usually go to the boardwalk when we stay at Disney. It was raining earlier the flip-flops were sticking on the boardwalk; it was like putting super glue on your fingers. Next thing you know, [transition B] I was on the floor with mud all over my white-laced dress. Surprisingly, lots of people helped me get up and get the mud off the dress. I’m very thankful to have great friends to help me though embarrassing moments like these. [clincher]
Another place [transition] where embarrassing moments happen to me is at (2) restaurants. These not only affect me but also people around me. For example, [transition A] Nick and I were waiting for out food to get here when this bird flew across the table. I panicked and I accidentally swung my hand across the table and spilled the drink. I felt so bad; it was all over his pants that I looked like he peed himself. Immediately, [transition B] we got up trying to avoid everyone laughing at us and yelling “PEE BOY”. We drove to our local Wal-Mart to buy new pants. He waited at the bathroom for about 20 minutes while I got him some new pants. It was the least I could do since he was going to get called ‘pee boy’ for the rest of the school year. At the end of the day, we had a good laugh and he wasn’t mad at all.