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Your digging in your garden and find a fist sized nugget of gold
Paragraph 1:
Introduce my pet
Pet’s name
What type of parrot it is
Paragraph 2:
Why people like to have pets
What kinds of pets I could have
The importance of looking after animals.

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This article is about pets and I am going to introduce you to my friend Tweety! Tweety is a pet parrot. My parrot is not any other kinds but it’s one of the best species of parrots! My parrot is an Abyssinian lovebird! I am going to tell you why people like to have pets, why people have pets, what kinds of pets you could have and the importance of looking after animals!
You could have any pet’s you would like and you will have fun with any pet you like! Most people like pets because it makes them smile and it makes them responsible as they have to look after them from a baby to an adult. The importance of looking after an animal is your pet depends on you to provide him or her with food, water, shelter, exercise as well as love and friendship.
This is how people look after and care for animals! Thank you for reading!

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Coming back from school and a stranger approaches me.
Describe how I felt (Emotive language)
Paragraph 2:
Writing a letter to Hayley
Explain the event I detail, where I was approached, what the stranger did, how I felt and I did!

28 Great Road
Coventry, Radford
GR2 4BR
Dear Hayley, Hey Hayley! How are you! I’m just want to write this letter because something bad happened on Tuesday 13th July and I would like to tell you. Carry on reading to find out…
Well, what happened was that a stranger had just came up to me saying to pass my bag! I was scared and I gave my bag. They looked through it and chucked out all of my 11+ papers. I was shocked! I knew Gayathri teacher was going to be angry! Then they asked me where I live. I said “I…I…I live in 128 March Road!” That was not even my address! They were laughing at me and whispering about me! Now I knew I’m going to get told off from Gayathri teacher and now I’m going to be late to class and Gayathri teacher will be double angry! Rushing across the road, I saw the stranger getting an old ladies bag. I didn’t know who she was and I ran over to her and I told her to come with me and she followed me and the strangers went off. I told the lady that the strangers are being mean and when the lady looked in her bag her purse was missing and I told her to tell the police and straight away she told the police. I told my parents and know I have to walk with my parents so nobody would do that to me again! Know the strangers are in jail and I better make a good excuse to Gayathri teacher too! 
Thank you for reading I hope you see you next time Hayley! Bye From Thivya

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Stranger Danger /35

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By Thivya Giritharan Y6

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