Thesis Statement: The Government Controlling Everything
First off i did not have a clear thesis statement which made it hard for me to argue towards my point i was trying to get across. I would re-write my thesis statement to help have a valid point to argue. My thesis statement would be about the government controlling everything and how they had to obey their rules. That would help towards my arguments and put me in the right direction. With that thesis statement i could use the tiqa tiqa format to write paragraphs that help me support my thesis statement. By having a good thesis statement that would help me have a great body paragraph and also make the point im trying to get across in my body more clear. Without a thesis it put me in the wrong direction and made it hard to have any valid points.