Slavery Footprint Rhetorical Analysis
On my revision about Slavery Footprint, I have made many changes and added a lot more to the final draft. I started my revision on my final draft after I rewatch the video and read all the comments I had. When I was writing the first draft, I kind of had a hard time writing about how they appeal to ethos, pathos and logos. After reading all the comments I found out that there was many things I had to work on for future rhetorical anaylsis paper. In my final draft, I added two paragraphs about who the intended audiences were. The ones that I think is the audience and the audience they talked about in the video. After reading other people's draft I learned more about analysing a specific part of the video. So for the revised draft I furthur explained