Responsibility and Topic Sentence
Out of all the pillars of success, responsibility is the most important. A responsible person will have a higher chance of success because they will be determined and committed to what they are doing. A person needs to be responsible to be successful because it shows that they are hardworking; therefore, responsibility is the most important attribute, since a person that isn’t responsible will most likely not be determined which can lead to being unsuccessful in life. Responsibility is the most important because if a person is responsible they will make sure they are doing everything they are supposed to be doing, also they will make sure that they do their work and do it right! People that are not responsible slack off and procrastinate, they struggle with daily things because they are not responsible. People that were responsible while in school or at work most likely have gone far in life, they are probably successful and have no money problems, but people that were not responsible probably have no money and are struggling just to get by. To be successful you have to be hard working. For example, my mom was hard working and responsible. Her boss said that she was doing her job well and she got a promotion to assistant manager. She made sure that when her boss told her to do something she did it. The people my mom works with are very unmotivated and when they do things wrong, my mom has to go fix their mistakes. This supports my topic sentence because my mom was hardworking and responsible in her work place and she was rewarded by getting a promotion, which can lead her to success in the near future. Another example that supports my topic sentence is when I am in my photography class in that class you have to be a hard worker and you have to be responsible because you have to take your own photos, not copy or take other peoples. You have to make sure you turn in your assignments on time and have taken quality pictures. To be successful in that class you