Research survey essay
11/4/14
Feedback Documentation Part 1: Questions
Is my formatting correct?
Do I have grammar errors?
Am I citing my work correctly?
Do my paragraphs come to clear conclusions?
Is there anything that I need to add to strengthen my essay?
Part 2: To-Do List
Beginning of the essay needs work she didn’t understand the connection right away with the powerful women listed in accordance with my research question.
Use the six points terms in my paragraphs
Suggested to add more symmetrical analysis
Comment on overall similarities and differences
Reference model drafts on e-college to understand the changes that need to be made
Part 3: Reader Evaluation
Kelly provided some excellent feedback: she suggested to place my 3 viewpoints at the end of my introduction to allow the reader to know what is to …show more content…
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