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Pinky: A Narrative Fiction
After Redd and Shanice went upstairs, I went to make me a sandwich. My phone started ring as soon as I started washing my hands I grabbed a paper towel and ran back to living room. When I saw Mrs. Patamon on the ID I almost broke my damn screen swiping to answer. I was so pissed that she was able to call me, I didn't even say hello I just started going off, she didn't say anything until after I said, “if I wasn't done with yo ass before, I'm done with yo ass now,” I heard her sniffling and felt like dying when she said, “I'm chained to a bed, Pooch tricked some young guys into snatching me for some money they didn't know who I was but they are trying to help me before Pooch returns, I tried calling Redd and Shanice but they didn't answer. I'm …show more content…
I told him everything and he hurriedly called Pinky back, he was pissed when some nigga answered the phone, “playboy you must have nuts the size of a fucking whale, you signed yo own death wish you just don't know it yet. You can't know who I am or you would've never blew your breath on my baby sister let alone kidnap her,” he got quiet for a second and then tears started running down his face, “Pinky baby girl is that you, Pinky are you okay. I’m killing all of them motherfuckers you hear me, when we find you they're dead.” I told him to put it on speaker, I was pissed as soon as I heard her say, “Redd listen they didn't know, Pooch set them up. Please calm down, I'm not going to let you kill them they needed the money.” I got up and texted my father's men that I'd have an address for them soon so get ready, I went and put on all black, I walked back into the living room and got the address from Redd and texted it to my father's men, I told them not to kill the two young men but to bring them in. I know Redd promised not to kill them young motherfuckers but I …show more content…
She's in stable condition which means she's breathing on her own.” I looked at my baby and wanted to cry for her and kill everyone involved all at the same time, Redd asked, “ok so when will she wake up Doc,” he looked between us and said, “that's totally up to Miss Harmony, she's been through a lot of trauma and her body needs rest, I can't give you a time frame of when her body and mind will bounce back, it could be days or even months, but I will be here until she's discharged.

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