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Personal Narrative: My Mom's Story Vs. History
Comparatively, both my mom’s story version and the history’s version are very alike because in my mom’s version she talks about how she remembers the twin towers being attacked by terrorist planes and he knew that many lives were lost during the attack and comparing it on what my research said was approximately about 2,996 people were killed in the terrorist attack. My mother talks about how she felt unsafe at first but then she started feeling safe again and if you compare that part with President Bush adding a new cabinet-level-department which works to protect the United States from terrorism then you can see how Bush tried making the world safer. A difference between the history’s version and my mom’s version is that my mom didn’t really know how the planes got hijacked …show more content…
I believe the thing that is important to my mom was knowing that her family and including her were safe from the attack, but she did feel bad for those who died and who lost part of their families. I know this because when I was interviewing her during the end she told me that she was glad that she didn’t loose me or anyone else in our family, and of course her friends. What I learned about myself when I compared how I wrote the interviewee’s story to how I wrote the objective account was I feel like I got more information down when hearing my mom telling me it because she was watching it happen live on her TV when that time occurred and her getting to talk about it in her version actually made me know a few new facts that I hadn’t known before. Unlike searching it up on the internet and having to read about it behind a computer who probably the writer wasn’t even there to experience it or see it live on TV and I wouldn’t get so much information down like I did with my mom’s

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