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One day, on Christmas eve, I was going to go get my friend a snow globe because he has always wanted one. I went to the store to get one. I bought one and took it home. There's 2 more hours till the party. I sit on the couch and then, Bam! I got hit in the head by the snow globe, sitting on a shelf above my head. I woke up inside the snow globe, looking at TV’s. This isn’t good. They all say to get into a shelter. There's going to be a big blizzard. “I thought this was all a dream,” I said. “I got to get home.”

I am traveling on the highway. A big wind wandering around me. It’s so cold! So, I ask people where Oneida is. I need to get there before the big celebration. There is a half hour until the party starts. Maybe

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