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My Brother Zorak: A Narrative Fiction
The day I was a child, I witness my brother, brutally murdered my father and mother, years passed since then, and I grew strong and trained every day so I could face my older brother Zorak, but with my father’s blood flowing inside me, the former king, I was born an elite warrior one in a million. The day had come when I faced my brother Zorak and his army. Facinf my brother and the countless soldiers I shouted, “Zorak, you have ruled, you who killed our parents in cold blood, so you can be king will now bleed at my feet.” There they were, the brother Zorak, who is now King of the planet jungle behind his solders and Zero an alien elite of him class standing against Zorak’s elite alien army who’s known to be unbeatable throughout the universe. Zero being engulfed in his pink aura and red electricity spark around him, emitting a unique and high power. "Scared so soon, Zorak, why won't you come out and fight me like a MAN one on one, you who called yourself my brother and betrayed our family for power!?" Zero’s shouts, …show more content…
Zero barely even able to get up unlocked a power inside of him, the power of remembering he lost his parent, somehow triggered a hidden potential. “I will not die here, I WILL PRIVALE” Zero muttered, as he punched a hole in the ground. Zorak looking down at Zero felt a warming touch, shortly after he teleported to Zero and punched zero face down to the ground. Knowing that, Zero has far more potential, but he still has to learn how pain feels and that he had no intention to kill hisbrother. But instead, he will teach his brother a listen, even though he challenges his presence. Zero must learn the hard choices in life and not be justify by it. “I am sorry brother” Zorak
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