Legalization of marijuana
Legalization of marijuana would benefit the world in ways we cannot imagine. There will be no more deaths forfrom pharmaceutical prescriptions [Assertions need support with sufficient evidence.] , there will be the ability to produce industrial hemp, and the money that it can bring into the economy will be astonishing. The medical use for [Check preposition use—incorrect or unnecessary] marijuana has so many benefactors [Incorrect use of this word. Please consult a dictionary to find the word's definition and to locate the right word for this context.] compared to western-medicines. Do you remember seeing commercials; for this medicine it can help you with your one problem. But [Eliminate conjunctions (e.g., and, but, so) at the beginning of a sentence.] don’t [Avoid the use of contractions in formal writing (e.g., Don't = do not)] forget that you get at least five different medical problems that could be life risking [Incorrect use of this word. Please consult a dictionary to find the word's definition and to locate the right word for this context.] . With this magical [Incorrect use of this word. Please consult a dictionary to find the word's definition and to locate the right word for this context.] plant, you can have symptoms of sleepiness, hunger, and inner peace. This plant will also help fight against the pain that you can feel; [Use a semicolon between two main clauses not joined by a conjunction. Use a semicolon before and a comma after a conjunctive adverb. Delete or replace semicolons where they are not required.] emotionally and physically. There has also been not one death recorded in history from marijuana use. [Assertions need support with sufficient evidence.] The death from western-medicines is a number I’d rather not state. It is mass genocide and it needs to stop. Hemp, the future fiber! I have done my research on hemp on many different subjects. The ratio of paper that hemp can produce compared to a regular tree