341). Poole is still very young at twenty-three and it seemed unlikely that he will spend the next fifty years of his life idly on his $2400 a month pension from the government. After all, it was during his tour of duty that he was brutally injured. Grady noted that people like Poole who has suffered crippling or brain injury or whatever disability in the Iraq war, needs community resources to help them realign their lives after their injury. In this, I agree totally. Nevertheless, although Grady powerfully conveyed his idea of the war in Iraq by using the story of corporal Poole, the feelings of the readers are focus on the need to stop maintaining the war on Iraq. While this is important and urgent, it seems that the author had deliberately allotted limited space on other victims having similar or may be even have worse situation than Poole. I believe that the story would have been more forceful if the writer had cited at least a few more people whose situation is as colorful as with
341). Poole is still very young at twenty-three and it seemed unlikely that he will spend the next fifty years of his life idly on his $2400 a month pension from the government. After all, it was during his tour of duty that he was brutally injured. Grady noted that people like Poole who has suffered crippling or brain injury or whatever disability in the Iraq war, needs community resources to help them realign their lives after their injury. In this, I agree totally. Nevertheless, although Grady powerfully conveyed his idea of the war in Iraq by using the story of corporal Poole, the feelings of the readers are focus on the need to stop maintaining the war on Iraq. While this is important and urgent, it seems that the author had deliberately allotted limited space on other victims having similar or may be even have worse situation than Poole. I believe that the story would have been more forceful if the writer had cited at least a few more people whose situation is as colorful as with