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The authors use of diction creates a cheerful mood in the poem because it explains and shows how America was better than any other country,in stanza 1 and 2 it quotes “O beautiful for spacious skies,For amber waves of grain,would make me feel cheerful it shows how america keeps clean and not just sloppy they actually take care of their country other than other countries,in stanza 19 it quotes “And mercy more than life’’,means that instead of letting the mercy bother you in life enjoy and be happy live life and be happy in your life.

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