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Hi Numi: Poem Analysis
Hi Numi,

I appreciate the kind words and the feedback. Do whatever you like with the tracks, but me updated. I find time to work on music everyday, so I am always creating when I am free from writing papers and such. I do not mind the comparisons to the legends, anyhow, we need to figure out the arrangement to the "It Rains On Our Love" so you can be satisfied . What elements need to be taken out or what section need to be cut or added? I have zero problems changing anything. What sound you really looking for because I never asked you that to begin with. haha. You could actually send me like some piano chords and have me do the drums or whatever you prefer.. Just some ideas. haha. I will be sending you more RANDOM tracks later this week.
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