Elizabeth's Argument Against Legal Normativity
As mentioned by Elizabeth, my argument in the paper was weak as I was unable to elucidate it well. However, Elizabeth misunderstood my argument; I had intended to argue that legal normativity is an ineffective form of moral normativity, when taken from the perspective of natural law theorists, whose ultimate goal is to promote social harmony. Evidently, I did not articulate this argument well enough, which caused the misunderstanding. (Elizabeth had interpreted my argument as emphasizing the functions of society, and regarding whether these functions were moral.) I rephrased my argument to prevent further misunderstanding. Fortunately, with her comments, I noticed that certain parts of my essay were vague, required citations or were phrased