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Cinderella's Short Story: Drizella
“Everything was perfect until she came along mother,” I protested
“Right?” Drizella grumbled
“Girls, girls calm down… wait, she is a disgrace isn’t she?” my mother Iris confirmed.
I took a sip of my lemon tea and screeched “OUCH... CINDERELLA!!!”
Cinderella stepped into the room, “Yes?”
“Get me some ice for my mouth, you made my tea scorching!!!” I screamed.
“Yes ma’am.” Cinderella cowered.
Ugh, she’s such a little wimp I thought.
Later that beautiful spring day, a knock disturbed my reading, I closed my book and staggered down the stairs to see mother at the door talking to a plump, rosy cheeked man, he handed her an envelope sealed with a wax stamp.
Mother shut the door softly and held the letter in front of her squinted face.
“This came
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“WE’VE BEEN INVITED TO THE ROYAL BALL, SO THE PRICE MAY CHOOSE HIS BRIDE!!!” Drizella shrieked “Oh my god!”
I looked over at mother in disbelief, but something caught my eye behind her… it was Cinderella eavesdropping, I ignored her… but Drizella didn’t.
“Mother, Cinderella was snooping around , and she’s not cleaning my bathroom floor!” Drizella screamed in her high pitched voice.
Mother jerked her head in Cinderella’s direction and gave her a dirty look and yelled, ‘’You shall not go to the ball!” A sly smile grew across Drizella’s face.
I looked at Cinderella as a tear ran down her face, she turned, and ran up the unsteady, wooden steps that led up to her small room.
I whipped around and glared at Drizella, who unfortunately is my sister. Later, we went upstairs to our rooms to pick out our dresses for the ball. Then, I heard a scream come from my sisters room.
“Cinderella, get up here!” Drizella screeched,
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“Oh sorry ma’am” Cinderella replied with a sarcastic tone.
“Excuse me, are you taking a tone with me.?” She yelled back.
Drizella got up, walked up to Cinderella and said inches from her face “if you ever talk to me like that ever again, i will make sure you regret it… Now…”
She turned around and walked over to her desk and pulled a long piece of paper out of a drawer and said “Here this ought to keep you busy during the ball… Have fun.”
I looked at the piece of paper in Cinderella’s thin hand and it was a long, long list of chores, I have to say I kind of felt bad… I said kind of.
Cinderella shifted toward the door, she turned around and smiled at me… a shy smile.
That night when mother and Drizella were sleeping, I crept out of my room and slithered across the kitchen floor towards the stairs that led to Cinderella’s bedroom, I don't know why, i just felt the need to see her. I climbed the stairs very quietly, fearing my mother’s wrath. As I approached the bulky, dark door, a light shot out of the crack under the door. CINDERELLA WAS AWAKE, YES! I knocked on the door softly and then I

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