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Chaikira Alternate Ending
I'm walking through the library with my friends at school, searching attentively for books to read. I separated from them because I went to look at fantasy novels and they weren't much of a book lover. I skim over the titles of the books and read each of the book's summary on that specific shelf. I finally found two books that I personally liked. I was excited to read both of the books as I head over to my best friend, he hasn't noticed that I'm going to approach him. This would be a suitable timing to scare him as I thought. I'm so close to scaring him until I hear him say something in the line of "Chaikira? She's ugly and fat." I took a step back, as I glance up shocked as I look at him from behind. I could hear my heart shattering. All I'm feeling was distress and …show more content…
I know that it's an immature idea but I still stuck to it. As time grew he noticed that I'm avoiding him, he was so confused to what he did. He would ask multiple times what was wrong, until to the point that he considered it as a punishment. He accepted the fact that we didn't talk to each other anymore. I wanted to prove him wrong, I ended up losing a massive amount of weight in a year. It's good that I didn't starve myself to lose weight. Instead, I set out a good mindset on what I want to accomplish by eating healthier, and by being physically active. Which I would've never considered doing in a year or so before considering I was only in grade five. I'm proud that I was able to put something that put me in misery. Into a better person mentally by making me stronger and less insecure about my body as I did before. If I'm being honest right now, I would have regret if I didn’t get into shape, because now I'm a better person physically, I know I may not look that healthy or skinny compared to others, but I consider what I look like now to be one of the best versions of me. Thanks to what happened before I've grown as a person. I'm great friends with him again and I'm truly feeling good about
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