Beowulf Hook Sentence Essay
Hook sentence(s): Growing up in the heroic path, Beowulf was divided in such a differenct ways of one’s point of views.
B Set-up/Hints: Burton Raffel, an author who translated this book, shown how Beowulf structured though his journeys, or his quests, to be a real hero for everyone.
C Focusing theme/idea: Beowulf have been in many many fights shaped his thoughts and his behaviors which related to the theme of the books.
D Thesis statement: According to the theme of the work as a whole, Beowulf developed and undeveloped himself at the same time in all of situations that he have been through. His action also affect to other people and society around him. BODY PARAGRAPH 1
E Topic sentence: Fighting pattern of Beowulf mostly related to the …show more content…
As a family, the king of Danes was served with loyalty by Beowulf.
G Detail/Example: “My purpose was this: to win the good will of your people or die in battle”(43). From this quote, It show that Beowulf was already planned what he is going to do and it is a honorable behavior as a heroic warrior.
H Commentary #1: Beowulf’s behavior is clearly shown his loyalty not only for the king of the Danes but also to his people in the Danes.
I Commentary #2: By defeated Grendel and helped the Danes fear vanished, he has gained praise from many people including the king and it makes him proud when he done something good. He will continue doing the right things until his …show more content…
Grendel was tortured and killed by him.
I Commentary #2: Nevertheless, as he gets older, he keep getting weak compared to himself in teenager.
J Support #2: As an old king, his name was already been through the whole area, no one want to fight with him.
K Detail/Example: “I’ve worn this crown for fifty winters: no neighboring people have tried to threaten the Geats, send soldiers against us or talked of terror.My days have gone by as fate willed” (107). and “My time is gone” (109).
L Commentary #1: In his reign, nearly everyone was afraid of his power as he says in the quote that no one threatens them. However, after his death news spread over the countries, the war started again.
M Commentary #2: The strong hero has died and his death caused trouble between countries, Beowulf is like cat and other countries is mice so while the cat’s away, the mice will play.
N Conclusion Beowulf have learned more about kinship and the feeling when he was a king, it's helped him understanding the violent world, which made him died peacefully with the bravery deeds.
BODY PARAGRAPH
B Set-up/Hints: Burton Raffel, an author who translated this book, shown how Beowulf structured though his journeys, or his quests, to be a real hero for everyone.
C Focusing theme/idea: Beowulf have been in many many fights shaped his thoughts and his behaviors which related to the theme of the books.
D Thesis statement: According to the theme of the work as a whole, Beowulf developed and undeveloped himself at the same time in all of situations that he have been through. His action also affect to other people and society around him. BODY PARAGRAPH 1
E Topic sentence: Fighting pattern of Beowulf mostly related to the …show more content…
As a family, the king of Danes was served with loyalty by Beowulf.
G Detail/Example: “My purpose was this: to win the good will of your people or die in battle”(43). From this quote, It show that Beowulf was already planned what he is going to do and it is a honorable behavior as a heroic warrior.
H Commentary #1: Beowulf’s behavior is clearly shown his loyalty not only for the king of the Danes but also to his people in the Danes.
I Commentary #2: By defeated Grendel and helped the Danes fear vanished, he has gained praise from many people including the king and it makes him proud when he done something good. He will continue doing the right things until his …show more content…
Grendel was tortured and killed by him.
I Commentary #2: Nevertheless, as he gets older, he keep getting weak compared to himself in teenager.
J Support #2: As an old king, his name was already been through the whole area, no one want to fight with him.
K Detail/Example: “I’ve worn this crown for fifty winters: no neighboring people have tried to threaten the Geats, send soldiers against us or talked of terror.My days have gone by as fate willed” (107). and “My time is gone” (109).
L Commentary #1: In his reign, nearly everyone was afraid of his power as he says in the quote that no one threatens them. However, after his death news spread over the countries, the war started again.
M Commentary #2: The strong hero has died and his death caused trouble between countries, Beowulf is like cat and other countries is mice so while the cat’s away, the mice will play.
N Conclusion Beowulf have learned more about kinship and the feeling when he was a king, it's helped him understanding the violent world, which made him died peacefully with the bravery deeds.
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