Journal # 2
1) Since people in society have endued to make the issues of race, age and religion non-issues, it is time to include physical appearance in this category as well. This is the thesis developed in the essay on relationships “The Last Taboo”. “Your religion is no big deal in the U.S anymore. Neither is marrying someone of completely different generation.” this quote supports the author’s thesis because as she stated before religion and age are non-issues anymore. Another example to support the authors thesis is “
2) In “The Last Taboo” the author emphasizes the thesis through the use of dash and rhetorical questions. “Nobody minds of you date outside your tribe... but - as my brothers and sisters of the gay community have found - there’s a world of difference...” the author puts a dash at the beginning and end of the example of the community to emphasize how physical beauty is the subject of discrimination just as homosexuality is. Another example is “do you and your spouse agree on how many mirrors there should be in the house? What angle they are placed at and how well they are lit?” the author uses rhetorical questions here to emphasize if you disagree on something as shallow as where a mirror is …show more content…
“I never did this. I know as Eric Knott knows that there was always...” this quote is an example of the essay being in first person as the author uses the word “I” which is done when the point of view being used in first person. A quote that’s an example if there being personal experiences in the essay is “This made for an extraordinary ride for my mother knew her presence was hideously embarrassing”. This quote the author talks about something that happened to him in the past with a girl therefore it being a personal experience. These two quotes prove the essay “Breaking the Ice” is a personal