Abandoned Love Annotated
Abandoned Love
We seek for love,
We seek for care,
Our innate feature,
But love has vanished.
It slowly flew away from us.
Left in the cold blizzard,
Seeking for love.
They pretend for their necessities,
But they wouldn’t look back,
As it is over.
Then the blizzard come again.
A guy with receipts walk by,
Face of love,
Feeling of hate,
Heart of despair.
People laid on the road,
Stoned and pale,
Nobody cares, maybe some,
To take videos,
And tell the world,
By just a click.
Then the corpses left there,
With even colder hearts,
We must seek for the love,
We have lost long time ago,
Unless we want to be abandoned.
From where we live
Analysis of the poem
The poem ‘Abandoned love’ has lots of bizarre meanings. The purpose and function of the poem is a confession. I wanted to confess about the vicious reality writing this poem. It is said ‘We seek love, we seek care’ shows that we are really in need of love and care now, as more the society develops, the care and love between people vanish.
The organization of the poem is a free verse poem, as there is no any specific structure in the poem and it has no rhyming and consistent syllables.
The literary devices used are ‘tone’ and ‘personification’. The tone used is despair. The poem basically is about the vicious and egoistic view of …show more content…
There are lots of rhyming used in this poem as it is a couplet. There are 6 stanzas with 2 lines with rhymes at the end. For example, ‘Just looking to be the heir of the throne, looking until the breakage of bone’. The words ‘throne’ and ‘bone’ rhymes. Also, there is a simile in the poem, such as ‘Standing tall as a mammoth’. It basically describes the victorious player standing on the podium. Obviously the player who wins the gold, will be standing on the highest point of the podium, and it is described as mammoth because it is tall, and so is the victorious player on the
We seek for love,
We seek for care,
Our innate feature,
But love has vanished.
It slowly flew away from us.
Left in the cold blizzard,
Seeking for love.
They pretend for their necessities,
But they wouldn’t look back,
As it is over.
Then the blizzard come again.
A guy with receipts walk by,
Face of love,
Feeling of hate,
Heart of despair.
People laid on the road,
Stoned and pale,
Nobody cares, maybe some,
To take videos,
And tell the world,
By just a click.
Then the corpses left there,
With even colder hearts,
We must seek for the love,
We have lost long time ago,
Unless we want to be abandoned.
From where we live
Analysis of the poem
The poem ‘Abandoned love’ has lots of bizarre meanings. The purpose and function of the poem is a confession. I wanted to confess about the vicious reality writing this poem. It is said ‘We seek love, we seek care’ shows that we are really in need of love and care now, as more the society develops, the care and love between people vanish.
The organization of the poem is a free verse poem, as there is no any specific structure in the poem and it has no rhyming and consistent syllables.
The literary devices used are ‘tone’ and ‘personification’. The tone used is despair. The poem basically is about the vicious and egoistic view of …show more content…
There are lots of rhyming used in this poem as it is a couplet. There are 6 stanzas with 2 lines with rhymes at the end. For example, ‘Just looking to be the heir of the throne, looking until the breakage of bone’. The words ‘throne’ and ‘bone’ rhymes. Also, there is a simile in the poem, such as ‘Standing tall as a mammoth’. It basically describes the victorious player standing on the podium. Obviously the player who wins the gold, will be standing on the highest point of the podium, and it is described as mammoth because it is tall, and so is the victorious player on the