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At the first, writing an essay while English is not your first language is challenging. I started this semester knowing a bit about writing essays when I attended English Language Institute. The essays that I wrote were different from writing academic essays at a university. I started writing draft of my first assignment. I tried hard to push myself to finish two pages. The feeling that I got when the professor said that my essay was on track was pushing me forward to do more. I finish my final draft of my first paper with full three pages I couldn’t believe it and I was very proud of it. I did the same with the second and the third papers also but with more improvement. In the following, you will notice the improvement in my papers while you are reading my work in this portfolio that contains my drafts and my final papers. At the first, writing an essay while English is not your first language is challenging. I started this semester knowing a bit about writing essays when I attended English Language Institute. The essays that I wrote were different from writing academic essays at a university. I started writing draft of my first assignment. I tried hard to push myself to finish two pages. The feeling that I got when the professor said that my essay was on track was pushing me forward to do more. I finish my final draft of my first paper with full three pages I couldn’t believe it and I was very proud of it. I did the same with the second and the third papers also but with more improvement. In the following, you will notice the improvement in my papers while you are reading my work in this portfolio that contains my drafts and my final papers. At the first, writing an essay while English is not your first language is challenging. I started this semester knowing a bit about writing essays when I attended English Language Institute. The essays that I wrote were different from writing academic essays at a university. I started writing draft of my first assignment. I

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